hello senior year

[Pixelina]

So it begins again,
And do the dreams get in the way?
As they mold us like we're model clay?
Black and gray,
Expressive thoughts
Surpressed and treated like annoying knots.
But what we're taught is good for many
Many unlike myself, who chooses to rule the world.

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[machinery]

question: How long have you been writing?

It seems as though that you like to rhyme, which isn't my fortay...but appreciated at times.....rhyming schemes just make want to read them faster and faster, and I don't catch all of it....I am not trying to stress anything, but if I rhyme, which is rare, quite fucking rare..hahah...but if I do....I use spacing to my advantage...that way, I bring the reader in slowly, changing it up, instead of tap tap tap tap tap......
it's more like tap ta p ta p, you get the idea.....

just a thought....get back to me...

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[Pixelina]

i totally see your point. yeah, rhyme can
make it go faster.
i usually don't, but most of my older stuff
does incoorperate lots of rhyme, that's what
a lot of this is. i've been writing since
junior high sometime...
anyway, thanx for taking the time to read and
respond. i've been reading all your stuff, and i severely like it-very cool approaches,
individual

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[machinery]

well let's see some new stuff then, damnit!

and thank you for the comment.....



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